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sustainable exploitation of tuna stocks and responsible fishing

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In regard to the 25th session of IOTC in June 2021, I would like to inform you that the Islamic Republic of Iran, as a member of the Tuna Commission of the Indian Ocean, has always attempted for the sustainable exploitation of tuna stocks and responsible fishing, so that the rate of compliance to IOTC regulations and resolutions has reached 73% in 2020, and always in order to improve the system of collecting statistics and fishing information, provide historical fishing information in the form of IOTC standards, take regulatory, conservation, management, etc. measures and has carried out many efforts to improve it.
In regard to the 25th session of
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IOTC
in June 2021, I would like to inform you that the Islamic Republic of Iran, as a member of the Tuna Commission of the Indian Ocean, has always attempted for the sustainable exploitation of tuna stocks and responsible fishing,
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that the rate of compliance to
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IOTC
regulations and resolutions has reached 73% in 2020, and always in order to
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improve
the system of collecting statistics and fishing information, provide historical fishing information in the form of
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IOTC
standards, take regulatory, conservation, management, etc. measures and has carried out
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many
efforts to
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IELTS essay sustainable exploitation of tuna stocks and responsible fishing

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  American English
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102 words
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