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Survey of children's activities

Survey of children's activities 7aMW5
Read the sentences below and choose the best phrase to complete each sentence. is the one I recommend the fittest people who what astronauts do is to a fact that space administration needs now is was a dog that is space which is the isolation that 1 It’s only __________ become astronauts. 2 It’s __________ going into space is one of the most dangerous things a human can do. 3 To prepare for a mission, ___________ train, train and train some more. 4 It __________ was the first animal in space, not a cat. 5 It __________ many astronauts find so difficult when they’re in space. 6 What __________ more money. 7 It __________ many people believe to be the final frontier. 8 This book on space travel__________ the most.
Read the sentences below and choose the best phrase to complete each sentence.

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is
the one I recommend the fittest
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people
who what astronauts do is to

a fact that
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space
administration needs
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now
Did you mean "is", "was", or "it was"?
is was
a dog that

is
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space
which is the isolation that

1 It’s
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only
__________ become astronauts.

2 It’s __________ going into
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space
is one of the most
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dangerous
things a human can do.

3 To prepare for a mission, ___________ train, train and train
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some
more.

4 It __________ was the
first
animal in
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space
, not a cat.

5 It __________
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many
astronauts find
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so
difficult when they’re in
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space. 6
What __________ more money.

7 It __________
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe to be the final frontier.

8 This book on
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space
travel__________ the most.

IELTS essay Survey of children's activities

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
130 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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