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Over recent years, more and more people have been attending university and arguments have persisted as to whether students should pay for this privilege not. Although there are convincing arguments on both sides, I strongly believe that it should be free.

Over recent years, more and more people have been attending university and arguments have persisted as to whether students should pay for this privilege not. Although there are convincing arguments on both sides, I strongly believe that it should be free. 0AJlB
Over recent years, more and more people have been attending university and arguments have persisted as to whether students should pay for this privilege not. Although there are convincing arguments on both sides, I strongly believe that it should be free. One argument put forward in favour of charging students is that education is becoming more expensive to fund as universities grow in size. Consequently, making students pay may maintain standards and ensure the quality of the teaching. In addition, it is argued that most students benefit from university in terms of higher paid jobs, so it is fair that they pay for at least some of the cost, especially given that the majority of students attending university are from the middle classes. Last but not least, in many countries, there is a shortage of people to do manual jobs such as plumbing and carpentry, so making university more expensive may encourage people to take up these jobs. However, there are a number of arguments in favour of making university education free for all. Firstly, it will encourage more people to attend and this will benefit society. This is because it will lead to a more productive and educated workforce. Research has generally shown that those countries that have a better educated population via university have higher levels of innovation and productivity. In addition, there is the issue of equality of opportunity. If all students are required to pay, those on a low income may be dissuaded from attending, thus making it unfair. The reason for this is that they will likely not be able to secure financial support from their family so they will be concerned about the debts they will incur in the future. In conclusion, I am of opinion that all education should remain equally available to all regardless of income. This is not only fair, but will also ensure that countries can prosper and develop into the future with a well-educated workforce.
Over recent years, more and more
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have been attending
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university
and
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arguments
have persisted
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as to whether
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students
should
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pay
for this privilege not. Although there are convincing
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arguments
on both sides, I
strongly
believe that it should be free.

One
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argument
put forward in
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favour
of charging
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students
is that education is becoming more expensive to fund as
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universities
grow in size.
Consequently
, making
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students
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pay
may maintain standards and ensure the quality of the teaching.
In addition
, it
is argued
that most
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students
benefit from
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university
in terms of higher paid jobs,
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so
it is
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fair
that they
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pay
for at least
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some of the
cost,
especially
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given
that the majority of
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students
attending
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university
are from the middle classes. Last
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but
not least, in
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many
countries, there is a shortage of
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people
to do manual jobs such as plumbing and carpentry,
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so
making
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university
more expensive may encourage
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people
to take up these jobs.
However
, there are a number of
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arguments
in
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favour
of making
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university
education free for all.
Firstly
, it will encourage more
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people
to attend and this will benefit society. This is
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because
it will lead to a more productive and educated workforce. Research has
generally
shown that those countries that have a better educated population via
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university
have higher levels of innovation and productivity.
In addition
, there is the issue of equality of opportunity. If all
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students
are required
to
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pay
, those on a low income may
be dissuaded
from attending,
thus
making it unfair.
The reason for this is
that they will likely not be able to secure financial support from their family
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so
they will
be concerned
about the debts they will incur in the future.

In conclusion
, I am of opinion that all education should remain
equally
available to all regardless of income. This is not
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only
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fair
,
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will
also
ensure that countries can prosper and develop into the future with a well-educated workforce.
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IELTS essay Over recent years, more and more people have been attending university and arguments have persisted as to whether students should pay for this privilege not. Although there are convincing arguments on both sides, I strongly believe that it should be free.

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