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Elderly men and its contribution to society

Elderly men and its contribution to society 6xrLB

Society is integrated with people from all ages, likes, dislikes, professions, attributions, and many other characteristics that allow us to live within a peaceful and sane environment. Elderly men are often neglected, them as a whole and also their abilities, but there are several parts that integrate their life that we have not consider. They have lived and worked for and in society, therefore they are a vital part of the life as we know it. Often, as time passes by, we tend to set apart people for it abilities and their work, and by doing this, the elderly get excluded. But, we must start to think that their part in this world and in the present has not ended; we should be offering more opportunities regarding their wise knowledge on life experiences, failures and abilities.

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 that their part in this world and in the present has not ended; we should be offering more opportunities regarding their wise knowledge on life experiences, failures and abilities. 