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Survey About People's Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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Among of five cities in Australia that were compared, it is latter found that a majority of residents prefer went to a cafe for a coffee or tea instead of making by themselves which is almost 60% of residents approximately. While visiting a cafe was still much popular among the cities however, Adelaide is the city in which 50% of residents still prefer to make instant coffee. While a less popular section, buying a fresh coffee is still an unpopular option from residents’ perspectives. These data suggest that people in Australia tends to bought a prepared coffee or less simpler steps rather than dauntingly brew a coffee from fresh beans which is still an unpopular choice among the residents. However due to the trend of fresh coffee brewing in social media, more healthy options, and the authenticity of it, we can expect a growing number of fresh coffee purchases in the market at the following years. For example, there is a widely available instruction of brewing coffee from home in internet to promote that kind of lifestyle.
Among of five cities in Australia that
were compared
, it is latter found that a majority of
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residents
prefer went to a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
for a
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coffee
or tea
instead
of making by themselves which is almost 60% of
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residents
approximately. While visiting a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
was
still
much popular among the cities
however
, Adelaide is the city in which 50% of
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residents
still
prefer to
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make
instant
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coffee
. While a less popular section, buying a
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fresh
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coffee
is
still
an unpopular option from
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residents’
perspectives.

These data suggest that
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people
in Australia tends to
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bought
a prepared
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coffee
or
Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean "less simple"?
less simpler
steps
rather
than
dauntingly
brew a
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coffee
from
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fresh
beans which is
still
an unpopular choice among the
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residents
.
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However
due to the trend of
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fresh
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coffee
brewing in social media, more healthy options, and the authenticity of it, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
a growing number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fresh
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coffee
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchases
in the market at the following years.
For example
, there is a
widely
available instruction of brewing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
from home in internet to promote that kind of lifestyle.
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IELTS essay Survey About People's Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
177 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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