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Due to the pandemic wedding parties should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Due to the pandemic wedding parties should be banned. Q2GeP
It is considered that it is more advantageous to stop to conduct big uzbek wedding parties because of pandemic situation in the country even if it violates the human rights. I completely accept this opinion and from my point of view that health and budget of the people are more important than their wedding parties which are the result of some people’s dreams. It is known that uzbek wedding parties are conducted with 200 or 300 people minimum and the owners of the wedding are responsible for the food and drinks of all guests, even they will invite some famous artists to wedding parties by giving them enormous fees. Absolutely, this kind of wasting money has adverse effect for the budget of breadwinners of family, because usually breadwinners of the family are the sponsors for this kind of expenditures and some people may get some debt in order to make wedding more luxury. However, these kinds of wedding parties instigate many unpleasant consequences after the wedding like hardship to pay debts and difficulties to provide with necessities of the family. It is better to buy some necessary technics or other equipment for the family or traveling to other countries instead of conducting wedding parties. Everybody knows that it is pandemic time and very hard time for governments and for every human being. Everyone should protect him/herself from dangerous COVID-19 virus. Doctors are advising not to gather with many people at one place, because of the easiness of spreading virus in crowds. So that is why it should be banned to do wedding parties with 200 or 300 people with scary risks to get virus. It is stated above that people may do wedding parties by getting debts and even there are many cases that breadwinners got serious illnesses due to their debts. In conclusion, making big wedding parties has serious adverse effects for people’s health and family budget, people can owe money or get serious illnesses due to weddings, that is why it is better to ban weddings forever.
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is considered
that it is more advantageous to
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stop
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because
of pandemic situation in the country even if it violates the human rights. I completely accept this opinion and from my point of view that health and budget of the
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people
are more
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important
than their
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wedding
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parties
which are the result of
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some
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people’s
dreams.

It
is known
that
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uzbek
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wedding
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parties
are conducted
with 200 or 300
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people
minimum and the owners of the
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wedding
are responsible for the food and drinks of all guests, even they will invite
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some
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famous
artists to
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wedding
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parties
by giving them enormous fees.
Absolutely
, this kind of wasting money has adverse effect for the budget of breadwinners of
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family
,
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because
usually
breadwinners of the
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family
are the sponsors for this kind of expenditures and
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some
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people
may
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get
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some
debt in order to
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make
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wedding
more luxury.
However
, these kinds of
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wedding
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parties
instigate
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many
unpleasant
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consequences after
the
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wedding
like hardship to pay debts and difficulties to provide with necessities of the
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family
. It is better to
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buy
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some
necessary
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technics
or other equipment for the
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family
or traveling to other countries
instead
of conducting
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wedding
parties.

Everybody knows that it is pandemic time and
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very
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hard
time for
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governments
and for every human being. Everyone should protect him/herself from
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dangerous
COVID-19 virus. Doctors are advising not to gather with
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many
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people
at one place,
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because
of the easiness of spreading virus in crowds.
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So
that is
why it should
be banned
to do
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wedding
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parties
with 200 or 300
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people
with scary
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risks
to
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get
virus. It
is stated
above that
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people
may do
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wedding
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parties
by getting debts and even there are
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many
cases that breadwinners
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got
serious illnesses due to their debts.

In conclusion
, making
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big
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wedding
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parties
has serious adverse effects for
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people’s
health and
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family
budget,
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people
can owe money or
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get
serious illnesses due to
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weddings
,
that is
why it is better to ban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weddings
forever.
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IELTS essay Due to the pandemic wedding parties should be banned.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
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