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The three-pie charts presented capture data describing the amounts of possibly detrimental supplements (sodium, saturated fats and sugar) incorporated within four standard American meals. Broadly speaking, American citizens ingested the majority of their sodium and fat at dinner, while sugar intake occurred mainly during snacks. Another general perspective finds that breakfast contained the lowest percentage for all three nutrients. A specific analysis reveals that the combined totals of Sodium at lunch and breakfast equalled the 43% taken in at dinner. Similarly, the tallied percentage for saturated fat consumption for snacks and breakfast matched the 37% digested during dinner. In a like manner to the previous points, consolidated sugar ingestion percentages at dinner and lunch paralleled the 42% eaten at snack time. Regarding Americans absorbing sugar in the course of the day, the percentage steadily rose by 3% between breakfast and lunch, and then 4% from lunch to dinner. As opposed to the other nutrients, the citizens took in sodium at the same 14% for snacks and breakfast. On a final note, between breakfast and lunch, the saturated fat jumped 10% and then an additional 11% from lunch to dinner
The three-pie charts presented capture data describing the amounts of
possibly
detrimental supplements (sodium, saturated
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fats
and
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sugar)
incorporated within four standard American meals.

Broadly
speaking, American citizens ingested the majority of their sodium and
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fat
at
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dinner
, while
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sugar
intake occurred
mainly
during
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snacks
. Another general perspective finds that
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breakfast
contained the lowest
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percentage
for all three nutrients.

A specific analysis reveals that the combined totals of Sodium at lunch and
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breakfast
equalled the 43% taken in at
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dinner
.
Similarly
, the tallied
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percentage
for saturated
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fat
consumption for
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snacks
and
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breakfast
matched the 37% digested during
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dinner
.
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In a like manner
to the previous points, consolidated
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sugar
ingestion
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percentages
at
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dinner
and lunch paralleled the 42% eaten at
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snack
time.

Regarding Americans absorbing
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sugar
in the course of the day, the
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percentage
steadily
rose by 3% between
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breakfast
and lunch, and then 4% from lunch to
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dinner
. As opposed to the other nutrients, the citizens took in sodium at the same 14% for
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snacks
and
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breakfast
. On a final note, between
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breakfast
and lunch, the saturated
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fat
jumped 10% and then an additional 11% from lunch to
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dinner
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IELTS essay supplements. Compare and summarize

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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