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Stress based illness due to work life balance

Stress based illness due to work life balance YyKr5

Nowadays, there is a drastic increase in illness due to stress and work culture. This essay will showcase to you the causes of sickness due to stress which includes long working hours and job pressure. Here in this essay solutions to overcome these problems are also mentioned such as proper time management and personal care. According to me ther are mainly 2 advantages of online education. Firstly, online learning can save lost of money, such that we pay more on amities than the actual fee in on campus education. For example the major cost in on campus is transportation

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stress
 and work culture. This essay will showcase to you the causes of sickness due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 which includes long working hours and job pressure. Here in this essay solutions to overcome these problems are also
 mentioned such as proper time management and personal care.

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