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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this? qmOp
Few are of the opinion that mega market should only contains such food which is produced in their own nation rather than bring from overseas. I do believe this trend is good for the nation. My stance is explained in the ensuing paragraphs. The first argument which I would love to put forth is that due to this kind of business it will bring several benefits. This is to say that due to not import the food it will save the taxes and extra money dealing with this trade. For instance, China is deliberately build the supermarket which sells their own Chinese food such as noodles, pastas and prone. In addition to this locals are benefited to taste their own traditional food rather than international dishes. To elaborate, this can allow locals to stick their traditions and customs of making different cuisines with regular ingredients. Finally, if the foreign food items are crops in the native country, then farmers can earn extra wages. To illustrate, in India before 5 decades the Apple were imported from USA but nowadays it is vastly grow in Kashmir region. In fact it is now exported to other nations too. Nonetheless, it is the time of globalization and everyone is aware about international food and its ingredients. That means, many are of addicted to eat that cuisine due to ease of preparation and readily available. French fries from Japan, Pizza from Italy for example now famous all around the globe. To sum up, although there are few benefits to citizen to fulfill their taste and satisfaction, I believe traditional food items must be get priority. Governments should encourage shop owners to sell the tradition items which are made within the nation.
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which
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rather
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good
for the
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nation
. My stance is
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explained
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first
argument which I would
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to put forth is that due to this kind of business it will bring several benefits. This is to say that due to not import the
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food
it will save the taxes and extra money dealing with this trade.
For instance
, China is
deliberately
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build
the supermarket which sells their
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own
Chinese
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food
such as noodles, pastas and prone.

In addition
to
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locals
are benefited
to taste their
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own
traditional
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food
rather
than international dishes. To elaborate, this can
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allow
locals to stick their traditions and customs of making
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different
cuisines with regular ingredients.
Finally
, if the foreign
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food
items are crops in the native country, then farmers can earn extra wages. To illustrate, in India
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before
5 decades the Apple
were imported
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from USA
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but
nowadays it is
vastly
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grow
in Kashmir region. In
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now
exported to other
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nations
too.

Nonetheless, it is the time of globalization and everyone is aware about international
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food
and its ingredients. That means,
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many
are of addicted to eat that cuisine due to
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ease
of preparation and
readily
available. French fries from Japan, Pizza from Italy
for example
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now
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famous
all around the globe.

To sum up, although there are few benefits to citizen to fulfill their taste and satisfaction, I believe traditional
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food
items
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must
be
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get
priority.
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Governments
should encourage shop owners to sell the tradition items which
are made
within the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
.
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IELTS essay Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

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