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Supermarkets are selling more imported food than local ones. Why this is happening? Is it positive or negative trend?

Supermarkets are selling more imported food than local ones. Why this is happening? Is it positive or negative trend? lqdXw
It is true that supermarkets have started to sell less local food as a result of importing. This positive development of selling imported food has many benefits for both people and economy of governments; however, I think, there might be some exceptions of its positivity. There are many reasons why it is believed that selling and buying imported food is advantageous. First of all, international food is with more quality. Precisely, many people claim that the taste of fruits is, for example, not as satisfying as those abroad. In this case, to fulfill the wish of people, supermarkets tend to sell the demanding products. Another example would would be an opportunity to exchange with food products with other countries as well. If a government imports a type of food from one country, thanks to a contract between them, importing country can make a use of it to export its own products to that country. This kind of mutual benefit can significantly improve the food economy in countries. However, this development may seem to be negative because of several reasons. Firstly, an underestimation of local food by residents can extremely deteriorate the income of farmers and other food producing organizations. Conventionally, people see local food as with low quality even without checking it out. Thus, even if there is a high-quality food in a supermarket with almost no difference with those in other countries, people often find it reluctant to buy them without reading its label on it as there are more alternative options to choose. Often, these alternatives turn out be imported ones. Lured people by imported food despite even it costs higher than local one, they are prone to buy them because they are accustomed to do so. Seldom do people buy local products where another product seems to be better. To conclude, although importing food and selling it in supermarkets may have advantages for people to enjoy with high quality food and governments can exchange with their own products, reluctance to buy local food amid people can be arisen as a result of more imported options.
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started
to sell less
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local
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food
as a result
of importing. This
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positive
development of selling
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imported
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food
has
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many
benefits for both
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people
and economy of
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governments
;
however
, I
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think
, there might be
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some
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exceptions of
its positivity. There are
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many
reasons why it
is believed
that selling and buying
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imported
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food
is advantageous.
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First of all
, international
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food
is with more quality.
Precisely
,
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many
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people
claim that the taste of fruits is,
for example
, not as satisfying as those abroad.
In this case
, to fulfill the wish of
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people
, supermarkets tend to sell the demanding
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products
. Another example
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would would
be an opportunity to exchange with
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food
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products
with other
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countries
as well
. If a
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government
imports a type of
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food
from one
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country
, thanks to a contract between them, importing
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country
can
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make
a
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use
of it to export its
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own
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products
to that
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country
. This kind of mutual benefit can
significantly
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improve
the
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food
economy in
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countries
.
However
, this development may seem to be
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negative
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because
of several reasons.
Firstly
, an underestimation of
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local
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food
by residents can
extremely
deteriorate the income of farmers and other
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food
producing organizations.
Conventionally
,
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people
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see
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local
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food
as with low quality even without checking it out.
Thus
, even if there is a high-quality
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food
in a supermarket with almost no difference with those in other
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countries
,
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people
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often
find it reluctant to
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buy
them without reading its label on it as there are more alternative options to choose.
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Often
, these alternatives turn out be
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imported
ones. Lured
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people
by
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imported
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food
despite even it costs higher than
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local
one, they are prone to
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buy
them
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because
they are
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accustomed to do
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. Seldom do
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people
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buy
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local
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products
where another
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product
seems to be better.
To conclude
, although importing
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food
and selling it in supermarkets may have advantages for
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people
to enjoy with high quality
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food
and
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governments
can exchange with their
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own
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products
, reluctance to
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buy
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local
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food
amid
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people
can
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as a result
of more
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imported
options.
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IELTS essay Supermarkets are selling more imported food than local ones. Why this is happening? Is it positive or negative trend?

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  American English
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