Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The Vietnamese landscapes

The Vietnamese landscapes gD2Qd
The Perfume River turns light blue and weaves its dreamy way through peaceful country villages. A flower market has been established from the Truong Tien Bridge to the Cau Moi Bridge. Here all kinds of flowers show their colours, especially apricots and orchids. Entering the flower market, you find yourself lost in a wood of flowers. A great number of orchids in Hue are provided by Huyen Quang Pagoda and mountainous villages. At such other markets as Vy Da, Kim Long, Nguyet Bieu, An Hoa and Bao Vinh, preparations for Tet are also busy, recalling the Tet atmosphere of country villages in the old days. Whoever has ever lived in Hue and enjoyed Tet in Hue will certainly never forget the peculiar flavour of Hue at Tet. The natives/local people of Hue still keep the refine manners, the gentleness and quietness of the land of the ancient imperial capital. The inhabitants of Hue do not celebrate Tet in a noisy and wasteful way because in the heart of each native of Hue flows a peaceful Perfume River. Whoever is able to understand the Perfume River can understand the hearts of Hue people.
The Perfume River turns light blue and weaves its dreamy way through peaceful country villages. A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flower
market has
been established
from the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Truong
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tien
Bridge to the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Cau
Sarcasm can be deemed as rude. Consider alternatives.
Moi
Bridge. Here all kinds of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flowers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
their
Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.
colours
,
especially
apricots and orchids. Entering the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flower
market, you find yourself lost in a wood of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flowers
. A great number of orchids in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
are provided
by
Possible spelling mistake found.
Huyen
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quang
Pagoda and mountainous villages.

At such other markets as
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vy
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
, Kim Long,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Nguyet
Possible spelling mistake found.
Bieu
, An
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hoa
and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Bao
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vinh
, preparations for Tet are
also
busy, recalling the Tet atmosphere of country villages in the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
days. Whoever has ever
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
and enjoyed Tet in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
will
certainly
never forget the peculiar
Possible spelling mistake. 'flavour' is British English.
flavour
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
at Tet. The natives/local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'refine' is correct. If 'refine' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the refine
manners, the gentleness and quietness of the land of the ancient imperial capital.

The inhabitants of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
do not celebrate Tet in a noisy and wasteful way
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
in the

heart of each native of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
flows a peaceful Perfume River. Whoever is able to understand the Perfume River can understand the hearts of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hue
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The Vietnamese landscapes

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
192 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The Vietnamese landscapes