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summary of the text "A Polar Adventure" (Your summary should be less than 10 sentences).

summary of the text "A Polar Adventure" (Your summary should be less than 10 sentences). 9lyQW
So basically, "A Polar Adventure" is a story that happens about Amelia's family, the Britsh family. However, be more detailed the story is around how the difference between other families on vacation and Amelia's family when on the holiday. Also her rigors of ski training and how she became the youngest person ever ski to the South Pole. In the story, we have known that she is the daughter of a famous British explorer as well as her journey to pursue being a skier from childhood to adulthood
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A Polar Adventure
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is a story that happens about Amelia's
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Britsh
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family
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However
, be more detailed the story is around how the difference between other
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families
on vacation and Amelia's
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family
when on the holiday.
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Also
her rigors of ski training and how she became the youngest person ever ski to the South Pole. In the story, we have known that she is the daughter of a
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famous
British explorer
as well
as her journey to pursue being a skier from childhood to
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adulthood
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IELTS essay summary of the text "A Polar Adventure" (Your summary should be less than 10 sentences).

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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