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Advantage and disdavantage of placebo effect

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In the past, people rarely used placebo effect to cure sickness because it had some unspeakable side effects but now things have changed, people are using placebo effect more and more. Although placebo effect is a good medical treatment to have, it stills have some advantages and disadvantages. For the advantages, using placebo effect can make the users feel because when they use it, their brains release some sort of chemical which is produced by the body, and this can relieve pain. Moreover, the placebo effect can help cure some sicknesses more effectively than traditional treatments like it can help improve our blood pressure, reduce levels of stress hormones which can slow the harmful effect of an ailment. For the disadvantages, as you may have known, some of the fake “pills” contain a high level of sugar which affect negatively by the patients. Also, the placebo effect makes patients not trust proper treatment and they may overuse due to its effectiveness.

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