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One day in my daily life being an student

One day in my daily life being an student 2aWlA
First, I wake up. Then, I get dressed. I walk to school. I do not ride a bike. I do not ride the bus. I like to go to school. It rains. I do not like rain. I eat lunch. I eat a sandwich and an apple. I play outside. I like to play. I read a book. I like to read books. I walk home. I do not like walking home. My mother cooks soup for dinner. The soup is hot. Then, I go to bed. I do not like to go to bed.
First
, I wake up. Then, I
get
dressed. I walk to school. I do not ride a bike.
I
do not ride the bus.
I
like to go to school. It rains. I do not like rain. I eat lunch.
I
eat a sandwich and an apple.

I
play outside.
I
like to play.
I
read a book.
I
like to read books.
I
walk home.
I
do not like walking home. My mother cooks soup for dinner. The soup is hot. Then, I go to bed. I do not like to go to bed.
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IELTS essay One day in my daily life being an student

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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