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summarizing a reading about parkour

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It is believed that parkour is a state of mind rather than a sport. Virtually it seems that traceurs just try to get over different physical obstacles through various moves. However, in fact, it's about overcoming mental and physical constraints both. Parkour is based on the concepts of freedom, humility, self-development, and better knowledge of how to interact with the world. Although, there are a number of gyms and camps where you can learn and practice parkour many traceurs do not appreciate the idea of having dedicated space for their activity. Freerunning refers to another form of parkour, which focuses on personal development more, while parkour is often done as part of a group.
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is believed
that parkour is a state of mind
rather
than a sport.
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it seems that
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traceurs
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try to
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get
over
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different
physical obstacles through various
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moves
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However
, in fact, it's about overcoming mental and physical constraints both. Parkour
is based
on the concepts of freedom, humility, self-development, and better knowledge of how to interact with the world.

Although, there are a number of gyms and camps where you can learn and practice parkour
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many
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traceurs
do not appreciate the
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idea
of having dedicated space for their activity.

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Freerunning
refers to another form of parkour, which focuses on personal development more, while parkour is
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often
done as part of a group.
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IELTS essay summarizing a reading about parkour

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
114 words
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