Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Credit card are being used by majority of people of nowadays. What are the advantage and disadvantage to the customer.

Credit card are being used by majority of people of nowadays. What are the advantage and disadvantage to the customer. Jlow6
The importance of credit cards which was always debatable now has become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence the trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent year. This essay will highlight both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus it will lead to a logical solution. To begin with, although there are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments, but most preponderant one stem from fact that credit cards are very useful for everyone. It is form of source of money. Moreover, nowadays people use more this cards because it is very portable. When people went to outside they do not carry money. so people more prefer this credit cards. Some people get a loan in any emergency whenever they have dire need. However, there are some pitfall that negate this arguments which is certainly over whelm the potential influence of this trend, but one of the alarming is that some think it is very risky because nowadays crime rate increase day by day. Some time people lost their cards and then unknown person find out all information and money debited from account holder. One more is some individual unfamiliar from this service so that they were not use this credit card. To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach that conclusion the problem is that the majority of person use this cards they get lot of benefits while, other reject this trend because they feel unsecure.
The importance of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cards
which was always debatable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
has become more controversial with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent year. This essay will highlight both
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effect of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
and
thus
it will lead to a logical solution.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, although there are myriad of reasons which will
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
Did you mean "these"?
this
arguments,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
most preponderant one stem from fact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cards
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
useful for everyone. It is form of source of money.
Moreover
, nowadays
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
more this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cards
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
portable.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
There isn't usually a preposition before "outside". Did you mean "went outside"?
went to outside
they do not carry money.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
more prefer this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cards
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a loan in any emergency whenever they have dire need.

However
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "pitfalls"?
pitfall
that negate
Did you mean "these"?
this
arguments which is
certainly
over whelm the potential influence of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
one of the alarming is that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
risky
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
nowadays crime rate increase day by day.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
lost their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cards
and then unknown person find out all information and money debited from account holder. One more is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
individual unfamiliar from this service
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they were not
Consider using a past participle here: "used".
use
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
card.

To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach that conclusion the problem is that the majority of person
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cards
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
It seems that an article is missing.
lot of
benefits while, other reject this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they feel unsecure.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Credit card are being used by majority of people of nowadays. What are the advantage and disadvantage to the customer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    Can you tell me about introduce yourself
    I talk about introduce mysefl. My name is Binh. I'm 20 years old. I was born and grew up in HN. But now I'm studying in HCM. I'm a junior at TDTU. My major in business international. I want to become a businesswomen in the future. There are five people in my family including my parents, my sister, m...
  • 6band
    Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.
    In today's modern world number of students planning to study in Abroad after the completion of graduation. In this essay we will discuss about people positive way of aspects and negative way how students are benefits themselves. Some people believe the choice of studying Overseas have some disadvant...
  • 6band
    In Many Countries Only A Small Number Of People Earn Extremely High Salaries
    In some countries a handful of people earn significantly hefty remunerations and it is thought to be beneficial for the growth of the economy. However, a few people suggest that the government should limit / control it. I assert that salaries should be commensurate with an individual’s ability and n...
  • 6band
    Many people think that their country is being damaged by immigrants. Others instead, believe that immigration is a positive phenomenon.
    There are different views by the people of a country concerning the immigration system. Some views can reflect the positive side and others might reflect the negative portion. Further in this essay, I would discuss both reflections and my opinions on both. Firstly, if we consider why many native ci...
  • 5.5band
    I’m a big fan of music, I have been listening to music for 4 years.
    My favorite singer Son Tung is a talented singer with a voice full of wonder and fascination. He is a very handsome singer, not only has domestic fans but also a lot of foreign fans. He has a lot of top-notch songs, some with a gentle, chill melody but some fast beats that make me want to be danceab...
  • 6.5band
    obesity is becoming a serious problem. causes and solutions
    It is undeniable that many children around the world are becoming obese and this certainly becomes a serious problem. There are a lot of reasons behind this issue and I strongly believe that it can be solved by several solutions. Eating junk food is probably one of the main reasons for obesity. Mos...