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Can you tell me about introduce yourself

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I talk about introduce mysefl. My name is Binh. I'm 20 years old. I was born and grew up in HN. But now I'm studying in HCM. I'm a junior at TDTU. My major in business international. I want to become a businesswomen in the future. There are five people in my family including my parents, my sister, my brother and me. My sister are older and my brother is younger than me. I love my family so much. I'm very close to my family and I'm greatful for it. I’m friendly and willing to help other people. I often watches movie and listen to music in my free time. And I have a passion for traveling and exploring.
I talk about introduce
mysefl
. My name is
Binh
. I'm 20 years
old
. I
was born
and grew up in
HN
.
But
now
I'm studying in
HCM
. I'm a junior at
TDTU
. My major in business international. I want to become
a businesswomen
in the future. There are five
people
in my family including my parents, my sister, my brother and me. My sister
are
older and my brother is younger than
me
. I
love
my family
so
much. I'm
very
close to my family and I'm
greatful
for it.
I
’m friendly and willing to
help
other
people
.
I
often
watches
movie and listen to music in my free time. And I have a passion for traveling and exploring.
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IELTS essay Can you tell me about introduce yourself

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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