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summarize cheese making process

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Have you ever tasted cheese? it's yummy right? This essay explains how the cheese be made in industries. Overall, the whole process consists of 4 major steps namely pasteurization, standardization with filtration, coagulation and milling and also possesses of few other minor steps to help in moulding and dividing the material. The process starts with passing the raw milk to pasteurization followed by filtration where milk gets filtered. Then the filtered milk gets in coagulation along with an enzyme named rennet as well as with few microorganisms where the milk gives curd and whey as end result. The resultants gets cut in the next step and gets cooked in the following step. Cooked curd enters milling stage where the curd gets divided into few small particles and gets coated with salt. The salted resultant will be poured into mods and also will be pressed. Leave the pods for few minutes to get the ripened cheese. To conclude, I would like to say that the tasty cheese involves a dedicated and tough process only after this we can see cheese in the shelves of retail stores.
Have you ever tasted
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cheese
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it
's yummy right? This essay
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explains
how the
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cheese
be made
in industries.

Overall
, the whole process consists of 4 major
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steps
namely
pasteurization, standardization with filtration, coagulation and milling and
also
possesses of few other minor
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steps
to
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help
in
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moulding
and dividing the material.

The process
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starts
with passing the raw
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milk
to pasteurization followed by filtration where
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milk
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gets
filtered. Then the filtered
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milk
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gets
in coagulation along with an enzyme named rennet
as well
as with few microorganisms where the
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milk
gives curd and whey as
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end
result. The resultants
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gets
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cut
in the
next
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step
and
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gets
cooked in the following
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step
. Cooked curd enters milling stage where the curd
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gets
divided into few
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small
particles and
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gets
coated with salt. The salted resultant will
be poured
into mods and
also
will
be pressed
.
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Leave
the pods for few minutes to
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get
the ripened cheese.

To conclude
, I would like to say that the tasty
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cheese
involves a dedicated and tough process
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only
after this we can
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see
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cheese
in the shelves of retail stores.
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IELTS essay summarize cheese making process

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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