Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Many criminals commit further crimes as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

Many criminals commit further crimes as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society? B22V

Criminal rate has reached a peak these days. Inspite of the actions taken against them, they tend to repeat it. The reasons and effect on society will be discussed below. In today's era, there is a stiff competition in each and every field of life and due to which, earning money have become more and more difficult and another reason is because awful literacy en0 knowledge about any work, however that leads a way to committing crimes in the society to survive and look after their family. For example, if a person have a family of five and they don't have food to consume which is a basic necessity, so that person will choose the easiest and quickest way to earn penny. Eventhough, after releasing from prism, many criminals continue committing crime because of lack of skill and money Moreover, these Criminal activities have an adverse effect on the society. The foremost is, people stop believing on each other and look everyone with a stranger I am because of which people doing charity has significantly decreased. Second, due to these activities people need to invest plenty of money for their own and the house security. For example, nowadays most of the building have CCTV camera for the security of the residence in the building. To recapiculate, due to the increased competition, criminal activities are also increasing, as a consequence more and more people looses their hope from humanity

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscandalousillegalunlawfulviciousillegitimatedeplorable
Criminal
 rate has reached a peak these days. Possible spelling mistake found.InspireIn spite
Inspite
 of the actions taken against them, they tend to repeat it. The reasons and effect on society will be discussed
 below.

In This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's era, there is a stiff competition in each and every field of life and due to which, earning money have become more and more difficult and another reason is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 awful literacy en0 knowledge about any work, however
 that leads a way to committing crimes in the society to survive and look after their family. For example
, if a person have a family of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).five, and
five and
 they don't have food to consume which is a basic necessity, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that person will choose the easiest and quickest way to earn penny. Possible spelling mistake found.Even though
Eventhough
, after releasing from prism, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withculpritoffendercrookhooliganfugitivegangster
criminals
 continue committing crime This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of lack of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 and money

Moreover
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscandalousillegalunlawfulviciousillegitimatedeplorable
Criminal
 activities have an adverse effect on the society. The foremost is, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 believing on each other and look everyone with a stranger I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 doing charity has significantly
 decreased. Second, due to these activities You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 need to invest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of money for their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 security. For example
, nowadays most of the building have CCTV camera for the security of the residence in the building.

To Possible spelling mistake found.recapitulate
recapiculate
, due to the increased competition, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscandalousillegalunlawfulviciousillegitimatedeplorable
criminal
 activities are also
 increasing, as a consequence more and more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.loose
looses
 their hope from humanity