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Power production process description

Power production process description G30Ox

The information given here showing the production of electricity from hydroelectric power station. The overall process talks about from the beginning of the river to the national grid power lines. The entire systems are divided into two important parts. The first one is operated at the daylight and the other one is at the night. The whole production starts from the high-level reservoir and ends at the low-level reservoir. At the sunlight, the dam is open to make sure the water flow as the flows produce electricity. The water goes into the power station and finally the lower reservoir ensures the smooth electricity for us. The working process at night works in a reverse way. Here reversible turbines pump the liquid in the negative way. It directly goes to the upper reservoir. Since the water flow is not needed here, the dam has been closed for the night activities. All the electricity that has been produced here goes to the national grid and then it supplies according to the need.

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given
 here showing the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
 from hydroelectric power station. The overall
 process talks about from the beginning of the river to the national grid power lines.

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The
 entire systems are divided
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important
 parts. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
first
 one is operated
 at the daylight and the other one is at the night. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 whole production This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 from the high-level reservoir and ends at the low-level reservoir.

At the sunlight, the dam is open to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure the water flow as the flows produce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
. The water goes into the power station and finally
 the lower reservoir ensures the smooth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
 for us.

The working process at night works Consider replacing "in a reverse way" with the adverb for "reverse"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a reverse way
. Here reversible turbines pump the liquid in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 way. It directly
 goes to the upper reservoir. Since the water flow is not needed here, the dam has been closed
 for the night activities. All the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatservice
electricity
 that has been produced
 here goes to the national grid and then it supplies according to the need. 