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In 2007 there was a pathway to the City Hospital which has been modernised and explained over three years. A new road and site improvement is going to be built by 2010 that will have dramatic changes of public transport and transport interchange. In the west of Hospital road will be added bus station. Recently this was on the east side far away. Two main entry will be reconstructed. At that place we see two roundabout in the north and south. Public car park will be relocated from the south side of City hospital to the east side. In addition, access to the City hospital was renovated and improved for citizens. New station of public transport, staff parking were developed.
In 2007 there was a pathway to the City
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Hospital
which has been
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modernised
and
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explained
over three years.

A new road and site improvement is going to
be built
by 2010 that will have dramatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
of public transport and transport interchange.

In the west of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hospital
road will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
bus station. Recently this was on the east side far away. Two main entry will
be reconstructed
. At that place we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
two roundabout in the north and south. Public car park will
be relocated
from the south side of City
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hospital
to the east side.

In addition
, access to the City
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
was renovated
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
for citizens. New station of public transport, staff parking
were developed
.

IELTS essay summarise the information by reporting main features

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
120 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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