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SUGGEST AN ADVANCED SOFTWARE FOR BANKING TO YOUR MANAGER

SUGGEST AN ADVANCED SOFTWARE FOR BANKING TO YOUR MANAGER N3JK2

I WRITE TO EXPRESS MY EXCITEMENT ABOUT AN IDEA THAT COULD REVOLUTIONALISE THE BANKING SYSTEM. IT IS A SOFTWARE THAT FUNCTIONS AROUND THE CONCEPT OF FILE MANAGEMENT SYSTEM, AND IS EFFICIENT ENOUGH TO TACKLE THE WORKLOAD OF MILLIONS OF CUSTOMERS IN A SECURE MANNER. I WRITE TO CHECK IF YOU WOULD HAVE THE TIME TO ANALYSE THIS SOFTWARE, AND OFFER ME YOUR FEEDBACK. THIS APPLICATION, AG2. 0, WORKS ON ALL DESKTOP OPERATING SOFTWARE INCLUDING MOBILE OPERATING SYSTEMS SUCH AS ANDROID AND IOS. IT IS EASY TO INSTALL, AND USES A MISERLY 0. 4 MB RAM SPACE TO RUN FOR A DATABSE OF OVER A MILLION CUSTOMERS. THE APPLICATION IS USER FRIENDLY, AND ANYONE CAN BE TRAINED TO USE IT IN LESS THAN A DAY. IT CAN BE RUN AT EXTREMELY LOW BANDWIDTH, AND WILL ADVANTAGE BANKS IN THE RURAL SECTORS AS WELL. IN THIS TIME OF THE PANDEMIC, ESPECIALLY, WHEN ONE MAY HAVE TO WORK FROM HOME, THE APPLICATION COMES AS A BLESSING IN DISGUISE. I TRUST THE DETAILS I HAVE SHARED HAVE BEEN OF ASSISTANCE TO YOU. IT WOULD HELP A LOT IF YOU COULD ANALYSE THE APPLICATION AND LET ME KNOW HOW I CAN MAKE IT EVEN BETTER. I SHALL BE GRATEFUL TO YOU FOR A QUICK ACTION ON THIS REQUEST, AND I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU SOON.

I WRITE TO EXPRESS MY EXCITEMENT ABOUT AN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
IDEA
 THAT COULD Possible spelling mistake found.RevolutionariesRevolutionizeRevolutionist
REVOLUTIONALISE
 THE BANKING SYSTEM. IT IS A SOFTWARE THAT FUNCTIONS AROUND THE CONCEPT OF FILE MANAGEMENT SYSTEM, AND IS EFFICIENT This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
ENOUGH
 TO TACKLE THE WORKLOAD OF MILLIONS OF CUSTOMERS IN A SECURE MANNER. I WRITE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
CHECK
 IF YOU WOULD HAVE THE TIME TO Possible spelling mistake. 'ANALYSE' is British English.Analyze
ANALYSE
 THIS SOFTWARE, AND OFFER ME YOUR FEEDBACK.

THIS You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
APPLICATION
, AG2. 0, WORKS ON ALL DESKTOP OPERATING SOFTWARE INCLUDING MOBILE OPERATING SYSTEMS SUCH AS ANDROID AND IOS. IT IS EASY TO INSTALL, AND This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
USES
 A MISERLY
 0. 4 MB RAM SPACE TO RUN FOR A Possible spelling mistake found.DatabaseDATA BSE
DATABSE
 OF OVER A MILLION CUSTOMERS. THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
APPLICATION
 IS USER FRIENDLY, AND ANYONE CAN BE TRAINED
 TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
USE
 IT IN LESS THAN A DAY. IT CAN BE RUN
 AT EXTREMELY
 LOW BANDWIDTH, AND WILL ADVANTAGE BANKS IN THE RURAL SECTORS AS WELL
. IN THIS TIME OF THE PANDEMIC, ESPECIALLY
, WHEN ONE MAY This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
HAVE TO
 WORK FROM HOME, THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
APPLICATION
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
COMES
 AS A BLESSING IN DISGUISE.

I TRUST THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
DETAILS
 I HAVE SHARED HAVE BEEN OF ASSISTANCE TO YOU. IT WOULD This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
HELP
 A LOT IF YOU COULD Possible spelling mistake. 'ANALYSE' is British English.Analyze
ANALYSE
 THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionoperationutilization
APPLICATION
 AND This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
LET
 ME KNOW HOW I CAN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
MAKE
 IT EVEN BETTER. I SHALL BE GRATEFUL TO YOU FOR A QUICK ACTION ON THIS REQUEST, AND I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
SOON
. 