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LETTER TO A THEATRE MANAGER ABOUT A LOST JACKET

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I WRITE TO EXPRESS MY CONCERN ABOUT A JACKET THAT I ACCIDENTLY LEFT BEHIND AT YOUR THEATRE LAST TUESDAY. IT IS AN EXPENSIVE JACKET, AND HAS MY WALLET ALONG WITH A FEW OTHER THINGS IN IT. I WRITE TO CHECK IF YOU CAN HELP ME LOCATE THE JACKET, AND ARRANGE FOR IT TO BE SENT TO MY ADDRESS. I WAS AT YOUR THEATRE AT PARK CIRCUS FOR THE 7: 00 PM MOVIE. I WAS ON SEAT NUMBER M32 IN THE MIDDLE ROW TOWARDS THE LEFT. THERE WERE APPROXIMATELY A HUNDRED PEOPLE AT THE THEATRE ON THAT DAY, AND MY NEIGHBOURING SEATS WERE UNOCCUPIED. IT WAS A BLACK LEATHER JACKET WITH A FUR HOODIE AND 2 POCKETS IN THE FRONT. THE WALLET WAS MADE OF BLACK LEATHER, AND HAD SOME MONEY AND MY IDENTIFICATION IN IT. I TRUST THE DETAILS I HAVE SHARED HAVE BEEN OF ASSISTANCE TO YOU. IT WOULD HELP A LOT IF YOU COULD INVESTIGATE THE MATTER AND INFORM ME IF AND WHEN THE JACKET IS FOUND. I SHALL BE GRATEFUL TO YOU FOR A QUICK ACTION ON THIS REQUEST, AND I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU SOON.

I WRITE TO EXPRESS MY CONCERN ABOUT A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoattunicfursheathparka
JACKET
 THAT I Possible spelling mistake found.ACCIDENT LY
ACCIDENTLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
LEFT
 BEHIND AT YOUR Possible spelling mistake. 'THEATRE' is British English.Theater
THEATRE
 LAST TUESDAY. IT IS AN EXPENSIVE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoattunicfursheathparka
JACKET
, AND HAS MY WALLET ALONG WITH A FEW OTHER THINGS IN IT. I WRITE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
CHECK
 IF YOU CAN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
HELP
 ME LOCATE THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoattunicfursheathparka
JACKET
, AND ARRANGE FOR IT TO BE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
SENT
 TO MY ADDRESS.

I WAS AT YOUR Possible spelling mistake. 'THEATRE' is British English.Theater
THEATRE
 AT PARK CIRCUS FOR THE 7: 00 PM MOVIE. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 WAS ON SEAT NUMBER M32 IN THE MIDDLE ROW TOWARDS THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
LEFT
. THERE WERE APPROXIMATELY A HUNDRED This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 AT THE Possible spelling mistake. 'THEATRE' is British English.Theater
THEATRE
 ON THAT DAY, AND MY Possible spelling mistake. 'NEIGHBOURING' is British English.Neighboring
NEIGHBOURING
 SEATS WERE UNOCCUPIED
. IT WAS A BLACK LEATHER You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoattunicfursheathparka
JACKET
 WITH A FUR HOODIE AND 2 POCKETS IN THE FRONT. THE WALLET WAS MADE
 OF BLACK LEATHER, AND HAD This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
 MONEY AND MY IDENTIFICATION IN IT.

I TRUST THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
DETAILS
 I HAVE SHARED HAVE BEEN OF ASSISTANCE TO YOU. IT WOULD This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
HELP
 A LOT IF YOU COULD INVESTIGATE THE MATTER AND INFORM ME IF AND WHEN THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoattunicfursheathparka
JACKET
IS FOUND
. I SHALL BE GRATEFUL TO YOU FOR A QUICK ACTION ON THIS REQUEST, AND I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
SOON
. 