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As an adult, planning for the future is essential

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In a time when the world is becoming more and more modern and developing, as an adult, I think planning for the future is very essential because you will guide your every step along the path you have already mapped out. You will find your life truly has a purpose. With each passing day, you will no longer feel scared because you don't know what to do or depressed because you have nothing to do. When planning for the future, it's easier to spot shortcomings and difficulties when you want to get something done, so you know where you are now and how far away you are from getting it done. In addition, planning will help you gain more skills and realize how to plan to best achieve your goals. Planning will help the success rate to achieve the goal faster. In the process of implementation, there may be difficulties or mistakes or omissions in the plan, but patiently correcting and continuing, you will get the desired results. Your dream is always out of reach, maybe it's because you haven't really tried to make a plan for yourself to achieve it. But once the plan has been implemented, you will be surprised at the ability to achieve your dreams. In short, planning for the future is really necessary. How great your life achievements are depends on how meticulous and correct you are in your planning.
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IELTS essay As an adult, planning for the future is essential

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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