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I'm friendly person, I'm easy to make friends with people, and I've always been happy with people so I have a lot of friends and relationships.

I'm friendly person, I'm easy to make friends with people, and I've always been happy with people so I have a lot of friends and relationships. JwaXa
I'm friendly person, I'm easy to make friends with people, and I've always been happy with people so I have a lot of friends and relationships. I'm friendly person, I'm easy to make friends with people, and I've always been happy with people so I have a lot of friends and relationships. I'm friendly person, I'm easy to make friends with people, and I've always been happy with people so I have a lot of friends and relationships.
I'm friendly person, I'm easy to
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I'm friendly person, I'm easy to
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make
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friends
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, and I've always been happy with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I have
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a lot of
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friends
and relationships.

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'm friendly person, I'm easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, and I've always been happy with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
and relationships.
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IELTS essay I'm friendly person, I'm easy to make friends with people, and I've always been happy with people so I have a lot of friends and relationships.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
78 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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