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Are leaders born or made? It is a question that a lot of people are still scratching their heads to find the right answer. In fact, many people are born with a natural inclination to lead. However, I believe that leaders are made and most of us learn to lead from our experience. Leadership is a long-term activity. To become a leader people have to go through a process of learning and observation based on most cognitive skills, training, practice and experience. It is for these reasons that this emphasizes that leaders are not necessarily born. It shows that everyone is not born with the same talents and abilities, and that every great leader has a remarkable story behind their leadership journey. To comment with successful business leaders, there have been many famous names around the world. One of them is Mark Zuckerberg - a very talented programmer and leader who I admire and respect. He is the co-founder of Facebook and currently directs the company as President and CEO. His success in leadership has been recognized worldwide when he was once featured in the top 10 greatest leaders in the world and managed a business worth more than 500 billion USD. In Vietnam, the number of managers with good reputation is not small. Therefore, it is difficult to enumerate all of them, but there are still extremely typical faces that contribute significantly to socio-economic promotion and development such as Coffee King - Mr. Dang Le Nguyen Vu, General Director Vietjet - Mrs. Nguyen Thi Phuong Thao, etc. In which, I am especially impressed with the business journey of Vingroup's Chairman - Mr. Pham Nhat Vuong. Start from instant noodles - useful food in difficult times. He was honored as the "Founder of the fast food market" in Ukraine with a turnover of 150 million USD / year and profit margins of up to 40 - 50%. Not only that, following those successes, he continued to invest in a series of luxury projects in the fields of real estate, tourism, health, education, etc. across the country and has a very strong foothold. He is a typical example of a famous manager in Vietnam. It can be said that his dedication and contributions and many other famous managers of Vietnam in the economic field are the pride of both the nation and the country. Leading Vietnam to develop more and more and go to five continents. In conclusion, the process of creating and developing a leader is very long, arduous and strenuous day. Not only need natural gifts, but also great development based on the process of learning and training over time.
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are made
and most of us learn to lead from our experience.

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people
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go through a process of learning and observation based on most cognitive
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skills
, training, practice and experience. It is for these reasons that this emphasizes that
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are not
necessarily
born. It
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shows
that everyone is not born with the same talents and abilities, and that every great
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leader
has a remarkable story behind their leadership journey.

To comment with successful business
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leaders
, there have been
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many
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famous
names around the world. One of them is Mark Zuckerberg
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a
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very
talented programmer and
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leader
who I admire and respect. He is the co-founder of Facebook and
currently
directs the
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company
as President and CEO. His success in leadership has
been recognized
worldwide when he was once featured in the top 10 greatest
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in the world and managed a business worth more than 500 billion USD.

In Vietnam, the number of managers with
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good
reputation is not
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small
.
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there are
still
extremely
typical faces that contribute
significantly
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socio-economic
promotion and development such as Coffee King
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Mr. Dang Le Nguyen
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Vu
, General Director
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Vietjet
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Mrs. Nguyen
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Thao
, etc. In which, I am
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in Ukraine with a turnover of 150 million USD / year and profit margins of up to 40
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50%. Not
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that, following those successes, he continued to invest in a series of luxury projects in the fields of real estate, tourism, health, education, etc. across the country and has a
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very
strong foothold. He is a typical example of a
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famous
manager in Vietnam. It can
be said
that his dedication and contributions and
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many
other
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famous
managers of Vietnam in the economic field are the pride of both the nation and the country. Leading Vietnam to develop more and more and go to five continents.

In conclusion
, the process of creating and developing a
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leader
is
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long, arduous and strenuous day. Not
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need natural gifts,
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also
great development based on the process of learning and training over time.
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IELTS essay successful business leaders

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
441 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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