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how to change to have a good sleep

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As a matter of fact, I definetly a light sleepers, which is obstacle and trouble to make me to have a sound and heavy sleep is my working pressure with lethargic to earn various of money and property to fulfil my primary purpose in life. Every other day as hard working person, I burn a midnight oil to accomplish with many kind of job with difficult type of asssigments. I usualy stay up late to try to get a high score and reward for wonderful results from my job, and once in a blue mood to hit the sheet before middle of the night. With a number of white nights have increased incredibly make me lethargic and not feel full of engery anymore, I have recognized that if I countinue to burn the candle at the both end and don’t care about my work life balance, I will bear an insomnia soon with a light sleepr every day in my life and be nod off anywhere and anytime, with those fullly acknowlegement about metal and physical health. I have changed my lifestyle with many work out activities in the morning combining, consider myself for instance, I always take 30 min every fresh and beauty morning to start with yoga then 30 minues for gymastic, which is enough for me to be pink in good health, additinal avoid to sleep with one eye open, so to sumup, my life is better now with the raising of number night with heavy sleep and not feel worng side of the bed when getting up, it is the most precious gift, which I give it for myselt.
As a matter of fact, I
definetly
a light
sleepers
, which is obstacle and trouble to
make
me to have a sound and heavy sleep is my working pressure with lethargic to earn various of money and property to fulfil my primary purpose in life.

Every other day as
hard working
person, I burn a midnight oil to accomplish with
many kind
of job with difficult type of
asssigments
. I
usualy
stay up late to try to
get
a high score and reward for wonderful results from my job, and once in a blue mood to hit the sheet
before
middle of the night.

With a number of white nights have increased
incredibly
make
me lethargic and not feel full of
engery
anymore, I have recognized that if I
countinue
to burn the candle at the both
end
and don’t care about my
work life
balance, I will bear an insomnia
soon
with a light
sleepr
every day in my life and be
nod
off anywhere and anytime, with those
fullly
acknowlegement
about metal and physical health.

I have
changed
my lifestyle with
many
work out activities in the morning combining, consider myself
for instance
, I always take 30 min every fresh and beauty morning to
start
with yoga then 30
minues
for
gymastic
, which is
enough
for me to be pink in
good
health,
additinal
avoid to sleep with one eye open,
so
to
sumup
, my life is better
now
with the raising of number night with heavy sleep and not feel
worng
side of the bed when getting up, it is the most precious gift, which I give it for
myselt
.
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IELTS essay how to change to have a good sleep

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273 words
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