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Write about the following topic: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. 6nY8
The technology is taking new turns and breakthroughs every passing day leaving everyone surprised. One of the technological outcomes is the internet. It is nearly impossible to find someone who doesn't know how to use that, in these days. Mankind, started to use it for multiple purposes. Few started using it to deliver lectures and also to study. I agree to this concept of studying online rather than in a classroom. Students these days prefer to stay at home and prepare for exams or interviews using web. The main reasons behind this are that they can get privacy, comfort and accessibility to the desired information which are hard to find in schools. This approach can also saves money with a reduced transport and course fees. This type of preparation is yielding successful results. For example, I stayed at home to get myself well prepared for my job interview and this made me to get a job. Few individuals do not like to study online and go to schools or colleges to study in groups. This enables one to exchange information orally as a result a part of the brain can remember the data for a longer time and this doesn't make people feel lonely. For instance, I have a friend who likes to study offline who also got a job with that mode of prepare. Every individual has a different mindset and also require a different environment. Each coin has two sides; Likewise, everyone can go with either of the proposed ways as both can produce fruitful results.
The technology is taking new turns and breakthroughs every passing day leaving everyone surprised. One of the technological outcomes is the internet. It is
nearly
impossible to find someone who doesn't know how to
use
that, in these days. Mankind,
started
to
use
it for multiple purposes. Few
started
using it to deliver lectures and
also
to
study
. I
agree
to this concept of studying online
rather
than in a classroom.

Students these days prefer to stay at home and prepare for exams or interviews using web. The main reasons behind this are that they can
get
privacy, comfort and accessibility to the desired information which are
hard
to find in schools. This approach can
also
saves
money with a
reduced
transport and course fees. This type of preparation is yielding successful results.
For example
, I stayed at home to
get
myself
well prepared
for my job interview and this made me to
get
a job.

Few individuals do not like to
study
online and go to schools or colleges to
study
in groups. This enables one to exchange information
orally
as a result
a part of the brain can remember the data for a longer time and this doesn't
make
people
feel lonely.
For instance
, I have a friend who likes to
study
offline who
also
got
a job with that mode of prepare.

Every individual has a
different
mindset and
also
require a
different
environment. Each coin has two sides;
Likewise
, everyone can
go with
either of the proposed ways as both can produce fruitful results.
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IELTS essay : Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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