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These emotions are rushing in me today. Some are anger and hatred towards to people who wanted to dismiss me and I must find a way to recover from this misery and to escape to freedom. In this writing, I can understand myself on the root of these emotions and ways to overcome it.

These emotions are rushing in me today. Some are anger and hatred towards to people who wanted to dismiss me and I must find a way to recover from this misery and to escape to freedom. In this writing, I can understand myself on the root of these emotions and ways to overcome it. Omaj
I am dishearten to realize that there is nothing I can do to improve my situation. Thus, I am still stuck and no matter how hard I move forward, I find myself revert back to zero. For instance, I tried to meet people in Tinder. Unfortunately, I got scammed and left me with disappointment. I decided to deactivate my account and resort to primitive way of meeting peole. Sadly, it is Covid age and I must adhere to health protocol to prevent spread the virus. Consequently, meeting people is not ideal at the moment. I do not understand myself why I needed to talk to someone – is it because It is more than a year since the lockdown started and it wanted a company of a people. The longing to meet fresh faces and the warm of another people’s personality? At this moment, there is nothing I can do to improve my life. I got limited of people of whom I can keep in touch and I decline to chat with these people who rejects me and I am sure that it is reciprocated. I created this abandonment and lack of confidence to keep in touch since the trust is damage. In short, I isolated myself to the people who I thought I can depend on, but in reality will abandon me till the end. This is my process to recovery, and I must find a way to hasten it as soon as possible. It is merely more than a year now and it is time to do so. From instance, I focus on my work and improving my English proficiency inorder for me to pass my IELETS examination in May. On the otherhand, there is this urge to ignore this hatred and welcome friendship towards to the people who abadon me. Maybe this is my guardian angel speaking that I must forget all these negativities inside and release the grief in my heart. To be honest, I will always entertain them since they became part of my life, but with limited responses. It is akward to interact with people whom one thought can trust but decided not to. At least I know that I can no longer continue to waste my time with them. Let merely forget them and continue to live life without them. Bottom line, people will eventually come and go in life – that is a fact in life. It merely forlone that we attached ourselves with them. It is a pleasant to had that opportunity to encounter them part in our lifetime. They gave us lessons that we needed in our next quest in life. It is not a waste afterall but I am glad that they became part of my life. I just need to accept that they will no longer play a role in my life and that is part it. It is time to explore fresh start with everything and be appreciative of things that happened whether pleasant or not. Beginnings of new opportunities will come and merely prepare to accept anything as long as we pray to God’s for his will and guidance.
I am dishearten to realize that there is nothing I can do to
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improve
my situation.
Thus
, I am
still
stuck and no matter how
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hard
I
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move
forward, I find myself
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revert back
to zero.
For instance
, I tried to
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meet
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people
in Tinder. Unfortunately, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
scammed and
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left
me with disappointment. I decided to deactivate my account and resort to primitive way of meeting
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peole
.
Sadly
, it is
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
age and I
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must
adhere to health protocol to
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prevent
spread the virus.
Consequently
, meeting
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people
is not ideal at the moment. I do not understand myself why I needed to talk to someone
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
is it
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because
It is more than a year since the lockdown
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started
and it wanted a
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company
of a
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people
. The longing to
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meet
fresh faces and
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the warm of
another
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people’s
personality? At this moment, there is nothing I can do to
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improve
my
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life
. I
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got
limited of
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people
of whom I can
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keep
in touch and I decline to chat with these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who
Did you mean "reject"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'people' should be used.
rejects
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me and
I am sure that it
is reciprocated
. I created this abandonment and lack of confidence to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
in touch since the trust is damage. In short, I isolated myself to the
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people
who I
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thought
I can depend on,
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but
in reality will abandon me till the
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end
.

This is my process to recovery, and I
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must
find a way to hasten it as
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soon
as possible. It is
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merely
more than a year
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now
and it is time to do
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so
. From instance, I focus on my work and improving my English proficiency
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inorder
for me to pass my
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IELETS
examination in May. On the
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otherhand
, there is this urge to
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ignore
this hatred and welcome friendship towards to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who
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abadon
me. Maybe this is my guardian angel speaking that I
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must
forget all these negativities inside and release the grief in my heart. To be honest, I will always entertain them since they became
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
,
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but
with limited responses. It is
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akward
to interact with
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people
whom one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
can trust
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but
decided not to. At least I know that I can no longer continue to waste my time with them.
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Let
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merely
forget them and continue to
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live
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life
without them.

Bottom line,
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people
will
eventually
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come
and go in
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life
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–
that is
a fact in
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life
. It
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merely
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forlone
that we attached ourselves with them. It is a pleasant to had that opportunity to encounter them
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part
in our lifetime. They gave us lessons that we needed in our
next
quest in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. It is not a waste afterall
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but
I am glad that they became
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part
of my
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life
. I
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just
need to accept that they will no longer play a role in my
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life
and
that is
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part
it. It is time to explore fresh
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
with everything and be appreciative of things that happened whether pleasant or not. Beginnings of new opportunities will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
merely
prepare to accept anything as long as we pray to God’s for his will and guidance.
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IELTS essay These emotions are rushing in me today. Some are anger and hatred towards to people who wanted to dismiss me and I must find a way to recover from this misery and to escape to freedom. In this writing, I can understand myself on the root of these emotions and ways to overcome it.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
523 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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