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Studying the requirements and outcomes of moving to permanent housing for internally displaced people in the camps of northern Syria.

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Studying the requirements and outcomes of moving to permanent housing for internally displaced people in the camps of northern Syria. Studying the requirements and outcomes of moving to permanent housing for internally displaced people in the camps of northern Syria. Studying the requirements and outcomes of moving to permanent housing for internally displaced people in the camps of northern Syria. Studying the requirements and outcomes of moving to permanent housing for internally displaced people in the camps of northern Syria.
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in the camps of northern Syria.
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the requirements and
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outcomes
of
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moving
to
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permanent
housing for
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internally
displaced
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people
in the camps of northern Syria.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Studying
the requirements and
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outcomes
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
moving
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
permanent
housing for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
internally
displaced
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in the camps of northern Syria.
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IELTS essay Studying the requirements and outcomes of moving to permanent housing for internally displaced people in the camps of northern Syria.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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