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family rules when you go home

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one important rule in my family is that respect the elderly. it's shown by a greeting grandparents and parents when going out or coming back home, inviting them to eat. Respecting the elderly not only shows that you are well educated but also you are mature. I always respect this rule because I think it's really important in my life. another important rule in my family is that helping around with the housework. let's together sharing housework willingly. the third important rule in my family is that taking out studies seriously. revising old lesson and seft studying.
one
important
rule
in my family is that respect the elderly.
it
's shown by a greeting grandparents and parents when going out or coming back home, inviting them to eat. Respecting the elderly not
only
shows
that you are
well educated
but
also
you are mature. I always respect this
rule
because
I
think
it's
really
important
in my life.

another
important
rule
in my family is that helping around with the housework.
let
's together sharing housework
willingly
.

the
third
important
rule
in my family is that taking out studies
seriously
.
revising
old
lesson and
seft
studying.
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IELTS essay family rules when you go home

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
97 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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