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Studying abroad

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The student who finished high school and want to get a certeficate from a foreigner university will think to go to study in another country like Amirica or any European country, that is why studying abroad become a common idea now. It has a positive side and negative side. They will be shown in the following paragraphs. The advantages of studying abroad is a lot. Firstly, the most important thing that the student will get a certeficate from a good university. For example, if the student studied in Amirican university, he could work in a big company when he graduates. Secondly, he depend on his self. For example, he will make his food by his self. Also, it has a lot of disadvantages. One of them is the huge distance between the student and his family, it makes him miss his parents and his relatives. Moreover, he have a lot of waste time, studies show that 60% from the student's time is wasted in making his food, cleaning his clothes and doing a lot of tasks which were made by his mother. To sum up, studying abroad has advantages and disadvantages, but we can avoid its negatives by learning online on the websites of the university we want.
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student
who finished high school and want to
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get
a
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certeficate
from a foreigner
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university
will
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think
to go to study in another country like
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Amirica
or any European country,
that is
why studying abroad become a common
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idea
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now
. It has a
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positive
side and
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negative
side. They will
be shown
in the following paragraphs.

The advantages of studying abroad is a
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lot
.
Firstly
, the most
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important
thing that the
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student
will
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get
a
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certeficate
from a
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good
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university
.
For example
, if the
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student
studied in
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Amirican
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university
, he could work in a
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big
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company
when he graduates.
Secondly
, he
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depend
on his self.
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make
his food by his self.

Also
, it has a
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lot
of disadvantages. One of them is the huge distance between the
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student
and his family, it
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makes
him miss his parents and his relatives.
Moreover
, he
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have
a
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lot
of waste time, studies
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show
that 60% from the student's time
is wasted
in making his food, cleaning his clothes and doing a
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lot
of tasks which
were made
by his mother.

To sum up, studying abroad has advantages and disadvantages,
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but
we can avoid its negatives by learning online on the websites of the
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university
we want.
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IELTS essay Studying abroad

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
208 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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