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Studying on campus leads to more practical knowledge by intracting with the leactures and undergoing more handson classes. As we know on campus caricullum will be more based on practical knowledge than theories, which helps the students to develop real time experience. For instance, if a candidate is studying electronic elgineering he can go through the theories but he will be lacking the setup and skill to implement his theoritical knowledge to practical one. Even though online casses are booming up in current world on campus curicullam will result handson expertise.
Studying on campus leads to more practical knowledge by
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intracting
with the
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leactures
and undergoing more
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handson
classes. As we know on campus
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caricullum
will be more based on practical knowledge than theories, which
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helps
the students to develop real time experience.
For instance
, if a candidate is studying electronic
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elgineering
he can go through the theories
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but
he will be lacking the setup and
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skill
to implement his
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theoritical
knowledge to practical one.
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Even though
online
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casses
are booming up in
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current
world on campus
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curicullam
will result
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handson
expertise.

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