Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Studying a foreign language language is required in some schools. Overall, do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing? Explain your opinion.

Studying a foreign language language is required in some schools. Overall, do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing? Explain your opinion. PXqgK
I agree with the statement that is a great thing that some schools require a foreign language because this reasons. First, it pushes students to learn. It is known that a significant amount of teenagers are focused on hang out with friends, go to parties, and don't really care about their future. Nowadays, to get a job you have to stand out from others, knowing a second language can be the difference. Additionally, knowing a different idiom has to many advantages. Firstly, it helps you to take better decisions, your memory improves. In conclusion, I defend the idea of some schools requiring a second language because it can help you in the future, and helps your brain.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the statement
that is
a great thing that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
schools require a foreign language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
this reasons.
First
, it pushes students to learn. It
is known
that a significant amount of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "is"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'are' is not always incorrect.)
are
focused on hang out with friends, go to parties, and don't
really
care about their future. Nowadays, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a job you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
stand out from others, knowing a second language can be the difference.
Additionally
, knowing a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
idiom
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
advantages.
Firstly
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
you to take better decisions, your memory
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
.
In conclusion
, I defend the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
schools requiring a second language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you in the future, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
your brain.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Studying a foreign language language is required in some schools. Overall, do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing? Explain your opinion.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
117 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Studying a foreign language language is required in some schools. Overall, do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing? Explain your opinion.