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Some people say that traffic accidents are caused by the increasing number of motorbikes. Others blame for man’s fault. Which point of view do you agree? State at least three relevant evidences.

Some people say that traffic accidents are caused by the increasing number of motorbikes. Others blame for man’s fault. Which point of view do you agree? State at least three relevant evidences. 9Ybr0
In today’s modern society, traffic problem is seem to be frequently occur. Many people said that it caused by the increasing amount of motorbike but i feel that it seem to be caused by the human’s fault. On the one hand, it is universally accepted that most of the traffic casualties are caused by the bad awareness of the road user. Some people don’t wear helmet, blow the red light, … but the main cause of this serious problem i think it is the overspeeding. Many people go to fast that they can’t handle the speed. As a result a undersirable situation happen. On the other hand, a large number of traffic incidents are caused by young people’s careless driving. Many of them are not mature enough to fully understand the serious consequences of their actions or to be responsible for what they caused. In addition, as far as i know rudimentary vehicals is aslo a reason of this traffic problem. Many of them seem almost impossible to identify the shape or the brand of the vehical. They are not safe enough to join traffic because it is very easy to suddenly fall apart. In conclusion, i strongly support the goverment to raise the road user’s awareness, it is the best solution to enhance the transport system and aslo reduce the traffic accidents
In
today
’s modern society,
traffic
problem is
seem
to be
frequently
occur
.
Many
people
said that it
caused
by the increasing amount of motorbike
but
i
feel that it seem to be
caused
by the human’s fault.

On the one hand, it is
universally
accepted
that most of the
traffic
casualties are
caused
by the
bad
awareness of the road user.
Some
people
don’t wear helmet, blow the red light, …
but
the main cause of this serious problem
i
think
it is the
overspeeding
.
Many
people
go to
fast
that they can’t handle the speed.
As
a result
a
undersirable
situation happen.

On the other hand
,
a large number of
traffic
incidents are
caused
by young
people’s
careless driving.
Many
of them are not mature
enough
to
fully
understand the serious consequences of their actions or to be responsible for what they caused.

In addition
, as far as
i
know rudimentary
vehicals
is
aslo
a reason of this
traffic
problem.
Many
of them seem almost impossible to identify the shape or the brand of the
vehical
. They are not safe
enough
to
join
traffic
because
it is
very
easy to
suddenly
fall apart.

In conclusion
,
i
strongly
support the
goverment
to raise the road user’s awareness, it is the best solution to enhance the transport system and
aslo
reduce
the
traffic
accidents
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IELTS essay Some people say that traffic accidents are caused by the increasing number of motorbikes. Others blame for man’s fault. Which point of view do you agree? State at least three relevant evidences.

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