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Describe the steps of a process preformed by either a person or machine ?

Describe the steps of a process preformed by either a person or machine? GWPlg
I am going to describe the steps of how to make a chocolate cake in your kitchen without oven? first you should measure ingredients of the cake like flour, sugar, baking powder, cocoa, oil and milk. next use 6 eggs and mix them with a mixer for 15 min then add sugar, milk and oil little by little until the color of the mixed became light Yellow after this mixed all dry matters in another bowl and sift together twice and added to eggs and mixed again with a spoon slowly until mixed completely. at the end put them in a cake mold and put over the pot with boiling water in it
I am going to
describe
the steps of how to
make
a chocolate cake in your kitchen without oven?
first
you should measure ingredients of the cake like flour, sugar, baking powder, cocoa, oil and milk.
next
use
6 eggs and mix them with a mixer for 15 min then
add
sugar, milk and oil
little
by
little
until the color of the
mixed
became light Yellow after this
mixed
all dry matters in another bowl and sift together twice and
added
to eggs and
mixed
again with a spoon
slowly
until
mixed
completely.
at
the
end
put them in a cake mold and put over the pot with boiling water in
it
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IELTS essay Describe the steps of a process preformed by either a person or machine?

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