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Study at university or college compared to when they were in high-school.

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Many students find it is harder to study at university or college compared to when they were in high-school. Firstly, the curriculum gap needs to be bridged, more practical learning appraches should be implemented in primary and secondary level. Secondly, self-learning should be instill from inception of secondary level education so that kids are well prepared for the next level. In conclusion, students falling in higher education is a concurrent issue, as mentioned, curriculum differences and variation in accessment criteria's are the major problems.
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Many
students find it is harder to study at university or college compared to when they were in high-school.
Firstly
, the curriculum gap needs to
be bridged
, more practical learning
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appraches
should
be implemented
in primary and secondary level.
Secondly
, self-learning should be
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instill
from inception of

secondary level education
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so
that kids are
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well prepared
for the
next
level. In

conclusion, students falling in higher education is a concurrent issue, as

mentioned, curriculum differences and variation in
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accessment
criteria's are the major problems.

IELTS essay Study at university or college compared to when they were in high-school.

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