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First time I order through Zomato

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Yesterday, In afternoon, I was hungry so i decided to food by Zomato app. first I downloaded the Zomato app from Google Play Store. Then I filled some basics details. In this app lot of varieties of food were available like Chinese, pizza, punjabi etc. There were various mode of payment available like credit card, debit card, Google pay, cash etc. I payed the amount through Google pay because due to covid pendamic cash mode was not active at that time. After few time restaurant accepted my order and after some time delevery boy assigned for my order. when he reached the restaurant the food prepared so he waited some time. When the food was ready he picked my food and delivered on my address. I ate this delecious food with my family
Yesterday, In afternoon, I was hungry
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i
decided to
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food
by
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Zomato
app.
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first
I downloaded the
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Zomato
app from Google Play Store. Then I filled
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some
basics
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details
. In this app lot of varieties of
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food
were available like Chinese, pizza,
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punjabi
etc. There were various mode of payment available like credit card, debit card,
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Google pay
, cash etc. I
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payed
the amount through
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Google pay
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because
due to
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covid
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pendamic
cash mode was not active at that
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. After few
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time
restaurant
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accepted
my order and after
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some
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time
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delevery
boy assigned for my order.
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when
he reached the restaurant the
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food
prepared
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so
he waited
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some
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. When the
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was ready he picked my
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food
and delivered on my address. I ate this
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delecious
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food
with my
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family
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IELTS essay First time I order through Zomato

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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