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Nowadays, study at colleges and universities abroad is becoming more and more popular in the word. But beside the benefits, there are som disadvantages that we must take into account. In the essay, i will discuss both positive and negative aspects of study at colleges and universities abroad. There are plenty of advantages of choosing to study in a foreign. Firstly, when studying abroad students will be exposed to a high quality and modern education that helps students improve themselves. Sencondly, students become more familiar with the new cultures, which is completely different from their home culture. they will have the opportunity to practice their language skills and learn to adapt to their new lives. Studying abroad gives them the opportunity to find a good and high-paying job. Besides, studing abroad may bring about some difficulties. One problem the cost of studying abroad is too high for ordinary people and to have enough tuition students have to work part-time and their study time will be reduced. Another drawback is cultural differences. The culture and the conditions of the country where they study may be completely different from the culture of their home country and this is also the reason why they feel alienated. In conclusion, studying abroad helps students familiarize themselves with many new cultures, improving career opportunities, but they also face a lot of difficulties in terms of study costs and cultural integration
Nowadays,
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at colleges and universities
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beside the benefits, there are
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and
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aspects of
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at colleges and universities abroad.

There are
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of advantages of choosing to
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a foreign
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, when
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students
will
be exposed
to a high quality and modern education that
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helps
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students
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improve
themselves.
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Sencondly
,
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students
become more familiar with the new
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cultures
, which is completely
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different
from their home
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culture
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they
will have the opportunity to practice their language
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skills
and learn to adapt to their new
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lives
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Studying
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gives them the opportunity to find a
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good
and high-paying job.

Besides
,
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abroad
may bring about
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difficulties. One problem the cost of
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studying
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abroad
is too high for ordinary
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people
and to have
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enough
tuition
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students
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have to
work part-time and their
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time will be
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reduced
. Another drawback is cultural differences. The
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culture
and the conditions of the country where they
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study
may be completely
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different
from the
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culture
of their home country and this is
also
the reason why they feel alienated.

In conclusion
,
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studying
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abroad
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helps
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students
familiarize themselves with
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many
new
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cultures
, improving career opportunities,
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they
also
face
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a lot of
difficulties in terms of
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costs and cultural integration
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IELTS essay study at colleges and universities abroad

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
233 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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