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Study art how is it what about it

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From the research of Turnaround program reveal that the student who studying art increase in math scores and reading scores. Furthermore art work make them be more tolerance and empathy. However, the outcome of the most art classes depends on art teacher. Bad art teacher can make children hate art and reduce creativity. It’s important to look at a good school art program. But most school you have to pay more money to an art program. Art bring funds when the school charges activity fees to parents. So, even though there are a lot of benefit to study art but if it not worth enough, it will be unfortunate payment. This essay will analyse the advantages and disadvantages of study art at school. In order to compare whether it is worth it or not to pay more money to study art.

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