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Studies in abroad. Advantages and disadvantages on it.

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Form past few years students did a university dgree, they believe to do higher education in their own country. Nowadays, the quality of studies becomes tremendous as well as affects to ranking of our country institutes. To begin with, the major reason do higher studies in another countries because the quality of education is well, the faculties are highly educated, have a tremendous experience as well as knowledge of courses. For example Harvard University is one of the best institute in the world, due to the practical assessments are their so the students gain a better education. Moreover, higher opportunities for earning students got excellent campus placement as well as a consistent increased in payee to fullfill their dreams. On the other side, the principal of drawbacksof the higher universities. Firstly, the ascending expenses for survival in other countries. A middle class child has seek for borrowing form the bank for education and many more. For example miscellaneous expense living cost, food, basic needs are rocket as compare with own born country. Secondly serious damage to the ranking of organization of that origin goes downwards. Moreover, student did not perfer to persue thier studies in that. To conclude, Nowadays, they have ample of opportunities to go for futher studies in different culture. However drwabacks of input for middle class family face difficulties to imple to it
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IELTS essay Studies in abroad. Advantages and disadvantages on it.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
225 words
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