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Students these day love to go study abroad. Studying and living in a foreign country is a very beneficial thing to do. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons and examples from your own experience. v.1

Students these day love to go study abroad. Studying and living in a foreign country is a very beneficial thing to do. Give reasons and examples from your own experience. v. 1
Nowadays learner, enjoy their journey to learn oversea. Learning and taking place in a new area is an advantageous activity to try. In my opinion, it is a really good thing to learn and take place in another country. Firstly, learning or living abroad can give you new experiences about new Culture, new climate, and also to experience new meal test. When you arrive in a foreign Outland, you will meet new cultures that different from yours so you can learn from them, and you also feel differently about the temperature and meal, for example, when you are Asian you experienced hot temperature and main food is rice, but when you go abroad to new country like in Europe, you will experience new cold temperature and also their main food is not rice, instead they eat bread, cheese or other that different from yours so you can try all these new things. Moreover, when the student goes abroad, they will feel homesick. When you go abroad, you will be away from your family and friends that can make you feel lonely. Even though, you will meet new friends, but you still think about your family and friends who gave you support and closed to you. It's feel homesick for you and make you feel concerned. This is demonstrated when students are with their families and friends, they got the care and cheer up from them, and when they go far away, they will get not much care from the peoples around them in the new place, and also they will face their own problem with no much help like they used to. In conclusion, learning and living abroad will give new experiences and also can make you feel uncomfortable. It is a good thing for students to start their journey in a new country to get more experiences.
Nowadays learner, enjoy their journey to learn oversea. Learning and taking place in a
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area is an advantageous activity to try. In my opinion, it is a
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good
thing to learn and take place in another country.

Firstly
, learning or living
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abroad
can give you
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new
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experiences
about
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new
Culture,
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new
climate, and
also
to
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experience
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new
meal
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test
. When you arrive in a foreign
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Outland
, you will
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meet
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new
cultures that
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different
from
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yours
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so
you can learn from them, and you
also
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feel
differently
about the temperature and meal,
for example
, when you are Asian you experienced hot temperature and main food is rice,
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but
when you go
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abroad
to
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new
country like in Europe, you will
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experience
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new
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cold
temperature and
also
their main food is not rice,
instead
they eat bread, cheese or other that
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different
from
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yours
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so
you can try all these
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new
things.

Moreover
, when the student goes
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abroad
, they will
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feel
homesick. When you go
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abroad
, you will be away from your family and
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friends
that can
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make
you
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feel
lonely.
Even though
, you will
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meet
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new
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friends
,
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you
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think
about your family and
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friends
who gave you support and closed to you. It's
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feel
homesick for you and
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make
you
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feel
concerned. This
is demonstrated
when students are with their families and
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friends
, they
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got
the care and cheer up from them, and when they go far away, they will
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get
not much care from
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the peoples around them
in the
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place, and
also
they will face their
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problem with
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no
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help
like they
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used
to.

In conclusion
, learning and living
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abroad
will give
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new
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experiences
and
also
can
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make
you
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feel
uncomfortable. It is a
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good
thing for students to
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start
their journey in a
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new
country to
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get
more
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experiences
.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Students these day love to go study abroad. Studying and living in a foreign country is a very beneficial thing to do. Give reasons and examples from your own experience. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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