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Students should have less or no homework and spend more time on other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Students should have less or no homework and spend more time on other activities. with this statement? 8xO1r
It is suggested that homework should be dwindle or eliminated for students in order to have more time consumption in other activities. I wholeheartedly agree with this notion as homework would cause negative effects on students' physical health as well as become bored in study. The first reason is that homework could make students easily have illness. Students who be given redundant homework would not have much
It
is suggested
that
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homework
should be
Consider using the past participle "dwindled"?
dwindle
or eliminated for students in order to have more time consumption in other activities. I
wholeheartedly
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agree
with this notion as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homework
would cause
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negative
effects on students' physical health
as well
as become bored in study. The
first
reason is that
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homework
could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
students
easily
have illness. Students who be
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given
redundant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homework
would not have
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much

IELTS essay Students should have less or no homework and spend more time on other activities. with this statement?

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66 words
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