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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the name of God The information about percentage of radio and TV audience who are over 4 years old, during a day in Brittanie is illustrated by line chart below. The chart line time is from 6am to tomorrow 6am. People prefer listen to radio in the morning on the contrary, the number of TV viewers rise during the evening, and most of the people sleep during the night. Also both of the line chart fluctuate wildly. In the morning the number of people who listen to the radio fluctuate from just under 10 percent to the highest number about one third at 9am then increased slightly until the end of the day. In addition, the majority of audience changed at 1pm and they watch TV more. This trend continues till 9pm and the percentage of TV viewers reach to the highest at 50%. After that the whole number of audiences reduced until the midnight and the number and it continues again from 2am. The percentages of both TV viewer and who listen to the radio change incredibly during the day couple of times. At first both of them experience a huge increase in figure of audience respectively about one half and 30% in less than 12 hours, then the whole number of adenines falls about 0 at midnight In the name of God In the UK when people get old they are sent usually to the nursing home that increase public authority costs. In my opinion it’s better that aged people live with their relevant. This essay firstly discus living with family increase the Life Strengthens the immune system secondly, discus in this case government could upgrade the Infrastructure faster. Elderly who live with their family live longer than others. Old parents hope is their children and they become happy and forgot their problems when they see they efforts paid off. Moreover, children take care their father and mother better than anyone else and they are the most important thing for them. They are going to vacation and spend lots of good time together that leads to buddy Secrete more good hormones and it rise the Strengthens the immune system and incredibly increase the life Strengthens the immune system. Based on the research that published in New York Times people live longer in Third World countries due to the fact elderly live with their relevant. Most of the nursing home resident are government owned also The cost of managing them is very high. Thus if the number of them reduce government can Allocate its budget to other sectors. The cost of managing a nursing home includes housings food, housing, employee’s salary and health care. Old people usually get sick easier and they need every year checkup and expensive drugs. Thus health care needs lots of money. In addition, the cost of stuff’s salary is huge during a year. In the name of God In the UK when people get old they are sent usually to the nursing home that increase public authority costs. In my opinion it’s better that aged people live with their relevant. This essay firstly discus living with family increase the Life expectancy secondly, discus in this case government could upgrade the Infrastructure faster. Elderly who live with their family live longer than others. Old parents hope is their children and they become happy and forgot their problems when they see they efforts paid off. Moreover, children take care their father and mother better than anyone else and they are the most important thing for them. They are going to vacation and spend lots of good time together that leads to buddy Secrete more good hormones and it rise the Strengthens the immune system and incredibly increase the life Strengthens the immune system. Based on the research that published in New York Times people live longer in Third World countries due to the fact elderly live with their relevant. Most of the nursing home resident are government owned also The cost of managing them is very high. Thus if the number of them reduce government can Allocate its budget to other sectors. The cost of managing a nursing home includes housings food, housing, employee’s salary and health care. Old people usually get sick easier and they need every year checkup and expensive drugs. Thus health care needs lots of money. In addition, the cost of stuff’s salary is huge during a year. thus if the number of nursing house reduce government could save this money and extend Infrastructure. In conclusion, its better old people live with their children because children could take care them better and reduce extra cost of government that could spend better in other parts. In the name of God Rewarding enhance students’ performance more than punishing them. Although punishing is necessary for educate, in this paper I will argue rewarding has more benefit. This article firstly discusses encouraging students increase their desires to school as well as lessons more over it leads to they try harder secondly, discusses students who are punished probably lose their self confidence in addition they used to punish and wont correct their behavior. Children who are rewarded become more interested in that filed and do their best for giving reward again. Youth are the most sensitive group in society, in addition feeling of sadness last longer than happiness. Consequently, teachers should be careful about how to behave with students, also they should try to provide a happy atmosphere in the class and school and determine more rewards than reprimands. For instance, it’s better to encourage students even for a small progress in front of others. Self-assurance falls incredibly when someone is punished in front of others. Self-confidence is the image that we try to create of ourselves in the minds of others also the image that we think others have about us. Therefore, our perception of ourselves become worse in our mind when our mistake be reveal. Thus punishing should be secret and teachers try to ignore student’s small mistake. According to a study by Oxford University that compares the performance of students, most of the lazy students don’t care about being punish and they sued to it. By way of conclusion, I believe students’ performance affected by encouragement more over receiving reward is a netter motivation than Threatened by punishment in light of fact that students are sensitive and punishing has a bad effect on self-confidence.

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