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Students of schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Students of schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television). 2bl8k
In this modern era, there are a wide range of resources available to contemporary student, and choosing the most effective learning method plays a vital role in their academic achievement. While a number of individuals emphasize on the role of modern technology such as the Internet and TV in delivering effective learning and education, others opine that teachers' role is more essential for students' academic success. In line with the latter view, I believe that pupils can learn their subjects and learning materials better if they study with a knowledgeable and experienced teacher, as compared of to the Internet and media. To begin with, teachers can stimulate interest, and it is an undeniable fact that interested stimulated people tend to learn more. They can keep students focused on study. A student studying by himself through Internet and TV, may get bored and stop studying. Secondly, teachers can provide a faster and simpler way to present information to the students. They can come down to the level of a student and so are definitely better than computers. In addition, teachers are role models for students. They are scholars in action. They not only teach academic subjects, but also many social skills. Furthermore, there are many practical subjects, which students can learn best from the teacher. For example, experiments of physics and chemistry, are best learnt by the teacher guiding you at every step. What is more, teachers give assignments and regularly check them. This helps the teachers to recognize the weak points of students and guide them accordingly. All this cannot be done by the Internet and TV. On the other hand, it is also true that the Internet is an ocean of knowledge. You can get information about any topic on Earth from the Internet. But there is no authenticity of this information. What information to get and from where to get, requires a lot of expertise. The television also has a lot of educative programmes but students still need the guidance of the teachers at all stages of learning. Teachers can make even the dull and boring subjects seem interesting. So definitely students learn more from teachers. To conclude, it can be said, that no doubt TV and the Internet are very educative these days but students definitely learn more from the teacher.
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, and choosing the most effective
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method plays a vital
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role
in their academic achievement. While a number of individuals emphasize on the
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role
of modern technology such as the Internet and TV in delivering effective
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learning
and education, others opine that teachers'
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role
is more essential for students' academic success. In line with the latter view, I believe that pupils can
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learn
their
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and
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materials better if they study with a knowledgeable and experienced
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teacher
, as compared of to the Internet and media.

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with,
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can stimulate interest, and it is an undeniable fact that interested stimulated
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people
tend to
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more. They can
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focused on study. A
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studying by himself through Internet and TV, may
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get
bored and
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stop
studying.
Secondly
,
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teachers
can provide a faster and simpler way to present
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information
to the
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students
. They can
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come
down to the level of a
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and
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are definitely better than computers.
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,
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are
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models for
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students
. They are scholars in action. They not
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teach academic
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,
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also
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social
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skills
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, there are
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practical
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subjects
, which
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can
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best from the
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.
For example
, experiments of physics and chemistry, are best
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by the
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guiding you at every step.

What is more
,
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give assignments and
regularly
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check
them. This
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helps
the
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teachers
to recognize the weak points of
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students
and guide them
accordingly
. All this cannot
be done
by the Internet and TV.

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, it is
also
true that the Internet is an ocean of knowledge. You can
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get
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information
about any topic on Earth from the Internet.
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there is no authenticity of this
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information
. What
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to
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and from where to
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, requires
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a lot of
expertise. The television
also
has
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educative

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programmes
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still
need the guidance of the
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at all stages of
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learning
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can
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make
even the dull and boring
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seem interesting.
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definitely
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students
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more from teachers.

To conclude
, it can
be said
, that no doubt TV and the Internet are
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very
educative these days
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definitely
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more from the
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.
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IELTS essay Students of schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television).

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
384 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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