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In many countries should have sever problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this. What solution can you suggest

In many countries should have sever problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this. What solution can you suggest OVr8d
There are uncounted schools and institution in all over the world. In schools, children come to learn. When the children go to school, they called students. They should have lot of sever problems in school with behaviour. nNevertheless, mostly student have lack of sense. To begin with, many sever problems with students behaviour. First, they come late to reach at school. Students not obey parents guidance and school rules. The parents say to our child's go to school on time, but they not reached that time. Students not follow the parents guidance, students always focus on playing and watching programs. They not do any work. Student have no responsibilities about home. All student do bad habits in school and at home. I am a student too. Also I want fun and enjoyment in school. However, second problem is students not follow the instructions of teachers and principal and not obey school rules. Most of students have good behave with teachers, but the others behaved bad. Mostly bad students think that they go to school for fun and enjoyment. The teacher was very upset to those student. Teacher gave punishment to those students but they not walk on the right path. One mistake teacher is, student make friendly environment and teaches attract with bad students. Some students share jokes with teachers, this way is bad for both. In conclusion, I think, in all schools and institution make environment stricked. This way is marvelous for school and students. Teachers doing hard struggle with students for good behaving. Parents want to make angry behave with children's. This solution to make our children perfect. I think, all students doing hard work for better future. This way is good for parents and students. This suggestion Fantastic for schools.
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are uncounted
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schools
and institution in all over the world. In
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schools
, children
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come
to learn. When the children go to
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, they called
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students
. They should have
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lot of
sever problems in
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school
with
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behaviour
.
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,
mostly
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student
have lack of sense.

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with,
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many
sever problems with
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students
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behaviour
.
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, they
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come
late to reach at
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school
.
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Students
not obey
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parents
guidance and
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school
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rules
. The
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parents
say to our child's
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go to
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school
on time,
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they not reached that time.
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Students
not follow the
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parents
guidance,
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students
always focus on playing and watching programs. They not do any work.
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Student
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have
no responsibilities about home. All
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student
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do
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bad
habits in
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school
and at home. I am a
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student
too.
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Also
I want fun and enjoyment in school.

However
, second problem is
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students
not follow the instructions of
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teachers
and principal and not obey
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school
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rules
. Most of
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students
have
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good
behave with
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teachers
,
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but
the others behaved
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bad
.
Mostly
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bad
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students
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think
that they go to
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school
for fun and enjoyment. The
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teacher
was
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upset to those
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student
.
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gave punishment to those
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students
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but
they not walk on the right path. One mistake
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teacher
is,
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student
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make
friendly environment and teaches attract with
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bad
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students
.
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Some
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students
share jokes with
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teachers
, this way is
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bad
for both.

In conclusion
, I
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, in all
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schools
and institution
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environment stricked
. This way is marvelous for
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school
and
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students
.
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doing
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struggle with
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students
for
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good
behaving.
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want to
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angry behave with children's. This solution to
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make
our children perfect. I
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think
, all
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students
doing
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hard
work for better future. This way is
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good
for
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parents
and
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students
. This suggestion Fantastic for
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schools
.
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IELTS essay In many countries should have sever problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this. What solution can you suggest

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