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• Students in developing countries believe that studying abroad can help them have better future. Do you agree?

• Students in developing countries believe that studying abroad can help them have better future. Do you agree? WqOmb

One of the most promising features that studying abroad brings for the students who come from a developing country is that having more chances to find a suitable and well-paid job. Because of the fact that most top universities have a strong relation with remarkable companies around the world. These businesses prefer to employ a workforce who is graduated from high-ranked universities. So, there is a guaranteed future for these students if they apply to overseas universities. Also, Studying abroad has a number of significant benefits in terms of the experience of living. Due to the fact that most international universities overseas are crowded by cosmopolitan members. It means that the students of these universities come from different nationalities with their traditional culture. They can communicate together to understand their various aspects of living and share their own viewpoint with other students after some time, they have journeyed an excellent experience of how people around the world looking to their lives. Therefore, their personal skills will be growth and they become more open-minded to interact with people who have a different nationality. They can use these abilities in the feature decisions to make a brighter life for themselves with the help of the wide mind.

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