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Many students who leave this school have negative attitude towards learning. what are the reasons and solutions?

Many students who leave this school have negative attitude towards learning. what are the reasons and solutions? 5BXLN
Undoubtedly learning is never ending process, however a number of learners who have a completed their scondary education do not keep a optimistic think toward it. This essay shall not only explain its causes but also solution in upcoming paragraph. To begin with one of the most preferred factor of having negative prospective among study is unemployment rate. Saying more about it, when tutees see that their senior student are kicking around for obtaining petty jobs, even they have passed out post graduation and graduation, However do not receive nothing at the end after looking towards them other students start keeping bad attitude not only this but also ways of teaching making it more clear every now and then apply conventional method to teach the pupils some of them are unable to understand that study Plan as they have different mental ability they consider study as a burden on them. When it comes to discussing about the solution of this notion, the major step should be taken by the teachers. This is because they should be honest regarding their professions and use innovative ways to cognize the students about any curriculum Because of which they will keep learning. Moreover, government must provide the job opportunities to youngster so that, they could become good example among other students in this way they feel motivated parents should not insist their children to hold any particular stream, as they must inquire the puperence of their juvenile due to which they will show good thinking among education. After a long discussion over this matter it is Lucid that although there are a host of factors of a keeping wrong opinion among the study by students the solution of this notion cannot be left be behind which are more effective.
Undoubtedly
learning is never ending process,
however
a number of learners who have a completed their
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scondary
education do not
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keep
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a
optimistic
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think
toward it. This essay shall not
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only
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explain
its causes
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but
also
solution in upcoming paragraph. To
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begin
with one of the most preferred factor of having
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negative
prospective among
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study
is unemployment rate. Saying more about it, when
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tutees
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see
that their senior
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student
are kicking around for obtaining petty jobs, even they have passed out post graduation and graduation,
However
do
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not receive nothing
at the
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end
after looking towards them other
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students
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start
keeping
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bad
attitude not
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only
this
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but
also
ways of teaching making it more
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clear
every
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now
and then apply conventional method to teach the pupils
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some
of them are unable to understand that
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study
Plan as they have
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different
mental ability they consider
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study
as a burden on them. When it
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comes
to
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discussing about the
solution of this notion, the major step should
be taken
by the teachers. This is
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because
they should be honest regarding their professions and
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use
innovative ways to cognize the
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students
about any curriculum
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Because
of which they will
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keep
learning.
Moreover
,
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government
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must
provide the job opportunities to youngster
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so
that, they could become
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good
example among other
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students
in this way they feel motivated parents should not insist their children to hold any particular stream, as they
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must
inquire the
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puperence
of their juvenile due to which they will
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show
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good
thinking among education. After a long discussion over this matter it is Lucid that although there are a
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host
of factors of a keeping
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wrong
opinion among the
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study
by
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students
the solution of this notion cannot be
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left
be behind which are more effective.

IELTS essay Many students who leave this school have negative attitude towards learning. what are the reasons and solutions?

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295 words
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