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Businesses are 'waiting' for the opening plan

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"Expected to be no later than September 27, the opening plan will be announced so that people and businesses understand the plan after October 1", Mr. Tran Hoang Ngan said.  Currently, this plan is still a draft, taking ideas and continuously revised. According to economist, the problem of loosening the gap must definitely be mentioned, with the common goal of not only protecting people's life, but also protecting the health of the economy and people's mental health (which can be traumatic because of long distances), especially, ensuring Social Security. However, Ho Chi Minh City still has to be careful to open the door because it's also dependent on medical condition. Even though the business wishes, there's still take steps in harmony. " The next step must be very flexible on the basis of safety, " he said.
"
Expected
to be no later than September 27, the opening plan will
be announced
so
that
people
and businesses understand the plan after October 1
"
, Mr. Tran
Hoang
Ngan
said.  
Currently
, this plan is
still
a draft, taking
ideas
and
continuously
revised.

According to economist, the problem of loosening the gap
must
definitely 
be mentioned
, with the common goal of not
only
protecting
people
's life,
but
also
protecting the health of the economy and
people
's mental health (which can be traumatic
because
of long distances),
especially
, ensuring Social Security.

However
, Ho Chi Minh City
still
has to
be careful to open the door
because
it's
also
dependent on medical condition.
Even though
the business wishes, there's
still
 take steps in harmony.
"
The
next
step
must
be
very
flexible on the basis of safety,
"
he said.
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IELTS essay Businesses are 'waiting' for the opening plan

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