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Students have to complete various types of academic assignments in school. Chooseone of the assignments below and explain why you think it is beneficial for students.  Research paper Class presentation Group project v.3

Students have to complete various types of academic assignments in school. Chooseone of the assignments below and explain why you think it is beneficial for students.  Research paper Class presentation Group project v. 3
People have different views on global warming concern. However, while some people believe that it is the government responsibility to deal with global warming, others think that is the individual duties. This essay will discuss these viewpoints in order to determine the best options. On the one hand, it is said that global warming concern should be solved by a government who has authority to enforce new legislation to control against the dramatic rise in global warming, which is caused by greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide and methane that are released into the atmosphere and makes ecosystem impaired and results in global warming. For instance, the stricter law implemented by the government for deforestation, the less number of trees will be cut in the near future, so the earth's atmosphere will remain constant. On the other hand, small contribution by individuals also matters a lot, in order to decrease global warming. For example, people should prefer walking over carrying a car towards small distance or just in an emergency they can use a car. Also, the amount of electricity is used less in the form of switching off the lights if it is not required, resulting less burning of fossil fuels such as oil and gas which are used for the production of the electricity. To sum up, while some think that the global warming issue should be resolved by the government as it has the power to implement strict laws against deforestation, others argued that it is the duty of an individual in the society as little contribution is sometime enough to curb global warming. In my opinion, both the individual and government collaborative efforts should be adopted to tackle the global warming problem.
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have
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different
views on
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global
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warming
concern.
However
, while
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some
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people
believe that it is the
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government
responsibility to deal with
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global
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warming
, others
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think
that is
the
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individual
duties. This essay will discuss these viewpoints in order to determine the best options.

On the one hand, it
is said
that
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global
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warming
concern should
be solved
by a
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government
who has authority to enforce new legislation to control against the dramatic rise in
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global
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warming
, which
is caused
by greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide and methane that
are released
into the atmosphere and
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makes
ecosystem impaired and results in
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global
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warming
.
For instance
, the stricter law implemented by the
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government
for deforestation, the less number of trees will be
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cut
in the near future,
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so
the earth's atmosphere will remain constant.

On the other hand
,
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small
contribution by
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individuals
also
matters a lot, in order to decrease
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global
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warming
.
For example
,
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people
should prefer walking over carrying a car towards
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small
distance or
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just
in an emergency they can
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use
a car.
Also
, the amount of electricity is
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used
less in the form of switching off the lights if it is not required, resulting less burning of fossil fuels such as oil and gas which are
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used
for the production of the electricity.

To sum up, while
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some
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think
that the
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global
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warming
issue should
be resolved
by the
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government
as it has the power to implement strict laws against deforestation, others argued that it is the duty of an
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individual
in the society as
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little
contribution is sometime
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enough
to curb
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global
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warming
. In my opinion, both the
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individual
and
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government
collaborative efforts should
be adopted
to tackle the
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global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
warming
problem.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Students have to complete various types of academic assignments in school. Chooseone of the assignments below and explain why you think it is beneficial for students.  Research paper Class presentation Group project v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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